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  1. Jun 29th, 2011, 05:31 AM #1
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    I've just done part 2 and would like someone to check it or improve it. First time I've done one of these and i think the paragraphs might be too long.

    Also part 3 still needs doing, so if anyone else wants to get it done, feel free.

    EDIT: Done part 3. Checking would still be appreciated though.
    Last edited by GD_Elite; Jul 8th, 2011 at 04:02 PM.
    I got saul, but I'm not a soldier - The Killers...ish
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